I took some of Dean’s advise from last class and changed my commercial a bit.
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I took some of Dean’s advise from last class and changed my commercial a bit.
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I like it better but I like the fact that you were willing to redo your work more. Such a good example of seeking exemplary work. Well done.
I like how you didn’t change the underlining story of your commercial, Brianne. The theme of it is unique and I think that by getting to incorporate your personal life into it, it made it “belong” to you that much more. However, the changes definately add to the overall effect.
It’s much more streamlined now.
I can definetly relate to the powering feeling of beating someone at guitar hero! Need I say its yet another one of my addictions! Cute commercial.